hello. these are the first couple lines of my epic. i am writing about waiting in line at dunkins and i go and they dont have my drink: Caffeine is the way to go! "Craving for some iced coffee with seven sugars and extra cream and a shot of coconut to keep my day running, decided to wait in the long line that goes out the door." Please feedback will be nice, i want to know if i am on the right track
is this thing still due tomorrow? because its pretty late and i still don't fully understand what needs to be done.
ReplyDeleteWe'll work on it tomorrow in class. Blame it on the snow :(
ReplyDeleteYeah I'm still confused :/
ReplyDeleteso do we still have to come in with a draft or just an idea on what to write about?
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ReplyDeletewhoa... whoa... whoa... This is a senior ENGLISH blog so use ENGLISH not that other language.
ReplyDeleteof course it is JORGE
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ReplyDeleteMiguel, a swear is a swear whether it is an acronym or not...clean it up!
ReplyDeleteCome to class with an idea of what you want to write.
hello. these are the first couple lines of my epic. i am writing about waiting in line at dunkins and i go and they dont have my drink: Caffeine is the way to go! "Craving for some iced coffee with seven sugars and extra cream and a shot of coconut to keep my day running, decided to wait in the long line that goes out the door." Please feedback will be nice, i want to know if i am on the right track
ReplyDeleteI think you need to exaggerate the length of the line.
ReplyDeleteohh okay. i will try to work on that more. thank you
ReplyDeleteMrs.Breen I was wondering if you could look over my mock epic and see whether or not its going the right way.I'm not funny so yeah.
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